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friends
I am nothing
without my friends;
without my friends,
I am dead.
Were it not
for my friends
I would not
be here,
for it is they
their few kind words
that keep the dark
in line.
Without my friends,
any of them,
not even those
I hardly know,
I would have made
the rash decision,
the final striking
blow.
The dark would claim
one more soul,
consuming
who I am,
and all the kindness
in the world
I would never get
to know.
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Literature
Free
It’s like the whole world was sittin’ on mah shoulders,
and it’s just been lifted away.
It’s feels like all my worries over,
like I could just fly away!
I ain’t gonna stand in the crowd no more,
Ain’t gonna be just another eyesore,
I’m Gonna Run, Gonna Fight,
Gonna run and Live my life!
Nothin’ left to keep me down.
Nothin’ left to hold me back!
Nothin’ left to keep me chained.
Nothin’ left that can keep- me- restrained!
No more can I feel- those mad things in my head.
No more will I want- to find myself dead.
No more will I-
No more can I-
No more will it feel like I’m going- in-saaaaane!
Free as a bird-
Free is my word!
I am free!- From my troubles!
Free!- From the madness!
Free!- From everything, that could hurt me!
Free!- From the pain!
Free from the ra-in!
Nothin’ left that could break- me- again!
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Literature
I Just Don't Want To Die.
Tornadoes are deadly things
not to be taken lightly.
One may take me today.
I just don't want to die.
Is that the howling wind
or just a car passing by?
I can't tell anymore
I just don't want to die.
What just hit my house?
I heard it right outside.
I don't think it broke a thing.
I just don't want to die.
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Literature
Strong
You all call me smart
you all call me strong
but I just can't help
feeling that you are wrong.
I don't solve my own problems
I don't face my own fears
I run from the truth
I cause my own tears.
I am undeserving of your kindness
undeserving of your praise
what I really deserve
is to be thrown in a cage.
When I get angry
the rage swallows my mind
when I get scared
I run uncaring of what I leave behind.
And yet there you stand
still by my side
YOU are strong one
not the one you stand beside.
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Literature
Eternal Rain
Every little
fear denied
Every little
tear uncried
is one step closer
to the pain
one step closer to
eternal rain
Clouds blocking the joyful
sun by day
shadows blocking the hopeful
moon by night
Without the joy
the days feel grey
without the hope
the nights are pain
The only thing
that remains the same
is the constant
rain.
This is the fate
that befalls
those who bottle
up their fears
those who bottle
up their pains
those who bottle
up their tears.
So please,
I beg of you,
don't go down
that path!
Face your fears
let flow your tears
and let go
of your pain,
for this is how
you prevent
the Eternal
Rain.
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Optimism
Ignore the pain
Ignore the sorrow
for there will
be a tomorrow,
Ignore the fear
building inside
of there being
no where to hide,
For there will
be no need to hide
if this darkness
can be fried,
Replace the darkness
with laughter and cheer
Hell,
go drink a  beer!
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Literature
A Demon's Perspective
When day
  fades to night
and with it all traces
  of sun's light
Marking it time
  for us to come out
time for us
  to run about
Through the darkness
  of the night
freezing mortals
  in their fright,
But what fun is there
  in simply causing fear
when there's so much more
  for us to hear?
Pain and strife
can cut like a knife!
With broken hope
it's hard to cope!
Whispering deceit
  filling you with lies
making your life
  fail before your eyes!
What is my goal?
 Can't you tell!?
To drive you mad,
  make your life a living hell.
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Literature
I don't care
I don't care
anymore
'bout that screaming
at my door
or 'bout the darkness
eating away
every hour
every day
at my life
at my soul,
removing me
of all control,
turning me
into a beast
that the darkness
has released
onto the Earth
onto the world
a dark dark tale
that's jut begun to unfurl.
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Literature
Every Journey
Every journey begins with the first step.
Every artist with their first doodle.
Every musician with their first hum.
Every writer with their first word.
Every person with their first breath.
You took the breath, now take the step & begin your own.
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Literature
A poem for the confused
When shattered memories
& broken dreams
fill your world with fright,
nothing is
as it seems
hidden from the light.
But what is this light
of which I speak
that can set us free?
It is love and hope,
the joy we seek,
that gift to truly see.
But see through what?
You must be thinking,
your face all a frown.
See through the fog
in which you're sinking,
sinking forever down.
But just what is
this foggy darkness
in which you're sinking down?
It is the fog your mind has made
to hide you from the starkness
of a world you've only seen upside down.
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Literature
A poem for a friend to the world
Nothing is eternal,
all will fade away.
Disappear,
like yesterday.
All we can do
is live our our stay,
& change the world
in every possible way.
Stand up.
Make a change.
Prove that the world
can be rearranged!
Help those
with less than you.
Help those
who aren't sure what's true!
But when the world
tries to take you away,
Fight.
Fight for your stay.
& think of those
all around.
Those whose love
for you abounds!
& don't let the world
bring you down.
Take you away
into the ground.
Fight for your stay.
Fight to live!
Because there's so much left
for you to give!
to your friends,
to the world!
There's so much left
of your story to unfurl!
So just remember
when this is all over,
we all love you
the world over.
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Nothing But A Puppet
I am nothing but a puppet,
A thing that you control.
A simple wooden toy,
I do not have a soul.
I am nothing but a puppet,
Someone to do your bidding.
Your demands from my body,
Relentless, unforgiving.
I am nothing but a puppet,
Your fingers pull my strings.
They pull in all directions,
Twisting, tangling.
I am nothing but a puppet,
My strings down by my sides,
Trailing closely right behind me,
My eternally bounding ties.
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Christian: Not a Label
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean I'll be showing up on your front porch
Waving a Bible in your face screaming "Have you heard?
Heard the Good News?"
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean I'll condemn you to hell for drinking that glass of wine,
Telling you to treat your body like a temple and keep it pure.
Jesus Christ drank wine, didn't he?
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean I'll be picketing your home, your work, your friends
Just because your beliefs don't agree with mine.
That's a little childish, right?
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean that I devote my Sundays to God, turn off the phone,
TV and light and read my Scriptures by daylight.
I'm a college student. We call Sunday the "day of catching up."
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean that I will spit on you because you deign to walk down the street arm-in-arm or hand-in-hand with a member of the same sex.
God created us all equal, didn't He?
Yes, I am a Christian.
That doesn't mean that I can't accept
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Hi!!!

I just like taking my hand at any type of art, and will probably only post what I'm proud of.

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Dracoan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hey dude, I'm back!
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU'RE ALIVE!!!
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Dracoan Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You are too!!
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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How long did that take you to put all of them there!?
Thanks!
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
You're welcome! ^^
About fifteen minutes. ^^;
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn. xD
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Dracoan Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Look out for landsharks...
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! NOT ZE LANDSHARKS!!!!

xD It's good to hear from you, bro!
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Dracoan Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same. Also, the landsharks aren't as bad as THE DRAGONSHARKS!!!!
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dragonsharks? I EAT THOSE FOR BREAKFAST!
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
YOU'VE BEEN HUGGED!! *Hug*
SpreadSpread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
RULES:
1- You can hug the pony who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 10 other ponies, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!
Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!
1-3 you're bad friend
4-6 you're an ok friend
7-9 you're a good friend
10-& Up you're loved

:hug:
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU'VE BEEN HUGGED!! *Hug*
SpreadSpread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)
RULES:
1- You can hug the pony who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 10 other ponies, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!
Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!
1-3 you're bad friend
4-6 you're an ok friend
7-9 you're a good friend
10-& Up you're loved
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Aww thanks! :iconyourockplz:
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
SORRY, BUT I'M DELETING YOU FROM MY LIFE! *clicks delete*
LOADING... ▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓ 99%................................ ERROR! It is impossible to delete our friendship. You mean so much to me!
[Post this to 10 people's walls who you never want to lose. If you get 3 back, you're an amazing friend!]
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SORRY, BUT I'M DELETING YOU FROM MY LIFE! *clicks delete*
LOADING... ▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓ 99%................................ ERROR! It is impossible to delete our friendship. You mean so much to me!
[Post this to 10 people's walls who you never want to lose. If you get 3 back, you're an amazing friend!]
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Canis-Niphlanus Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
Aw >w< thank you! 
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ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob
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KobraKid12 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hey! did you finnish drawing Terror yet?
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:iconthepoeticdragon:
ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
drawing what?
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theninjaguy2 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
3.1415926535.....
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:iconthepoeticdragon:
ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
3.14159265358979323846264338327950288419...
It's my favorite number. ^_^
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theninjaguy2 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Holy s*** how did you memorize that much?
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:iconthepoeticdragon:
ThePoeticDragon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually I forgot a lot, I once had it down perfectly to the 91st digit.
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MarinaMellon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the fave :D
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